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Post by MissChurro on Feb 6, 2016 16:13:13 GMT -5
This is an intriguing premise! It sounds like it could be comedic, and perhaps a little bit of darkness could be an interesting twist for a shoujo. My only advice is not to over-develop... It's an open plot with lots of possibilities, but you only have 3,000 words to work with, so be careful!
Good luck! I'm looking forward to the finished product.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2016 17:32:11 GMT -5
That will be a problem. I don't know if darkness is allowed in Shoujo though. And 3000 words will be a killer, so I will have to cut down on characters and plot points haha...
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Post by MissChurro on Feb 6, 2016 22:16:44 GMT -5
Next time, remind me to make the max word count a little higher. I think there are some shoujo out there with darker themes. Puella Magi Madoka Magica would be a good example, as well as a few others I've heard of like Basara or Paradise Kiss.
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Post by Nuyori on Feb 7, 2016 16:20:52 GMT -5
Quite interesting! These kinds of stories are my thing ^^.
You have the character's base personalities down. I'd say for now stick to those personalities as you write the story. I find that sometimes, the characters find out themselves while you write. And if you manage to add the dark themes to it, the characters reactions can determine a lot to the direction of the story.
I hope that helps a little.
Looking forward to the story!
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